Saturday, November 5, 2011

Readers journal # 9

Title: Strange happenings part:2
author: Avi
nikolas m.
601

Dear Mrs Zrhen:

 I have finished the book the strange happenings by Avi . The sort story is called Babolon.
The queen of Babolon wanted a beautiful child. When the queen took a walk in the forest she met a ugly women.  The ugly women said she can give here the most beautiful baby in the world. When the queen  got treatment from the ugly women she gave birth to a invisible baby! The queen committed suicide by jumping of a tower and the king died from stress. When the new invisible queen then was horned the most beautiful lady in the world.

 The queen needed a king so when she went to walk while thinking who to marry she came acrossed the  ugly women. She asked then to be normal where people can see here so she went to the ugly women's house and found body parts everywhere. Then the ugly women said " Now choose your parts body parts." The queen  picked all the body parts for the body. When she exited the house she then realized that all the body pars weren't all the same then she realized no one is perfect.

Your friend,

Nikolas .m        

1 comment:

  1. Dear Nick, This sounds like a very good and exciting book. But here are some tip that you should probably use next time you write your journals... You should give details and describe more in when you write or i mean type.

    This is a great and cool book i really want to read about it and here are some question do u like it? Where does the book or story take place? And what would you rate book from one to ten? Answer me back!!!!

    your friend,
    JOEY B.

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